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So waaaaaaaay back at the beginning of the school year...around Halloween, I guess, we had our prom week, where we got to wear spirit wear all week. I didn't have any of the clothes to wear, so instead I drew them. The first day was 20's and this is the result. I have to say most of it came out better than I expected it to. I really like it and a friend even offered to buy it off me. This will end up turning into my deviantID. And this time I’m going to do it.

Oh, and he’s not smoking: it’s a sucker or lollipop or however you want to say it.

P.S. Constructive Criticism Wanted.

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:iconmorgan-the-rabbit:
very cool looking character :-) can i suggest that you try to make the floor that he is walking on flatter, as it looks like it is on its side. just need some practice with perspective :nod:

when you upload, dont choice a size that is tooo large. it is best to choice a size that, when it is expanded, can be just about viewed in one screen, without having to move the slider up and down to see the rest.

I like how you have got the reflexion of the moon! nice touch :-) can i suggest that when you do the moon, you use a rubber rather then a pencil. so cover the sky with the pencil, then erase the moon into the sky :D

also, i think it would be interesting to see this digitalised :nod:

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"I've been to honest with myself,
I should of lied like everybody else."
:iconmeow-rawrr:
i like it!!!! its dead sexy:) oh and the above is pretty much wat i would say to:) but its not like im a drawer
:iconpancakemanx:
lol, thx.

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Garou Verroq,
Over and Out.
:iconpancakemanx:
Thanks for the advice! I never would have thought of most of that stuff. As for the ground, he was supposed to be on a bridge, but I see what you mean.

As for the moon and the rubber, I've limited access to supplies, so I'll have to try to find some near where I am. And I have no idea how to digitalize so...

Thx anyways, I'm looking forward to getting helpful comments from people like you so that I can fix my many mistakes!

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Garou Verroq,
Over and Out.
:iconmorgan-the-rabbit:
thats no problem :-) it is a good way of getting better :nod:

--
"I've been to honest with myself,
I should of lied like everybody else."

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